Tuesday, May 20, 2014

Swamp of Lerna

The Swamps Of Lerna The terrifying swamp of Lerna is where Hydra the 9 headed monster lives. The soggy ground of Lerna gives rise to slow bubbles emerging from the ground. The smell of horrifying swamp gives a heavy sweetish smell which will give anyone i mean anyone a crazy illusion. The moment you stick your feet into the soggy ground you will start to sink. The swamp was covered with a thick dark mist that was thick as the trees in the swamp. The swamp was dark and was filled with suspicious noises which mean even the Hydra might be lurking around. Never ever has a person seen the horrifying monster Hydra and made it out of the swamp alive. The terrible swamp of Lerna will make anyone who enters feel scared, frustrated and crazy due to extreme heat escaping from the ground. I hope you rethink your option of entering the horrifying swamp of Lerna. Rational: I think that this paragraph i wrote was the best out of the three i wrote. The reason why I think this one was the best is because i used lots of emotion into this paragraph. Descriptives are more interesting in my opinion because they are written with more emotion. Descriptive paragraphs are also more in depth than other paragraphs like the Narrative and Optional paragraphs. I also like the story of The Swamp Of Lerna” It was written with lots of depth.

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